Recount Writing
Recently I wrote a recount
We were trying to use our best writing skills: best punctuation, organisation, sentences, words (vocabulary), spelling and develop our ideas.
We also used the correct structure and past tense.
I was proud of my wow words because I used words like explained, but I need to work on punctuation because I used ones that I already knew.
What do you think about my writing?
What can I improve?
First Fun Forest Adventure
Paragraph sentence vocabulary wow words punctuation !().,? “ ”:
Have you ever been on a fun forest adventure if not not let me tell you about my first ever forest adventure
When we arrived I was shaking in excitement because it was my first time on a camp and i looked magnificent there was: blue sky, birds chirping nd the sun was like a heater it was awesome I saw my team slowly walking of while I was daydreaming but I caught up with them come
“COME SIT DOWN IN THE SHADED AREA EVERYBODY!” yelled the teacher so everybody could hear.
First we sat down in the shaded area and put sunblock on had a talk and ate some food then Mrs Ward told us where our cabin is and we went there
“This room is awesome Emily” I explained to Emily.
We put our bags under the bed so it is not in the walkway. We got told to go back downstairs, so we did.
We had another snack and went of in our groups i was so lucky to be with Mr Maclean and Chad we went off to archery first our group leaders shode us how to do it I didn’t get a Bullseye but all that matters is that I had fun next we were up fo the flying fox I was scared at first but I did it 3 times and found out there was nothing to be scared of.
Up last we went horse riding. My taekwondo teacher was the instructor ( Brender ) so I trusted her. I got the horse Charlie. It was so fun on the horses.
I personally think that was the funnest adventure yet and so did my friends. I will definitelyy, go back sometime soon with my family.